Wednesday, 1 April 2009
My Final Evaluation
Wednesday, 25 March 2009
Media Thriller Evaluation
Massie Road from 283goswell on Vimeo.
Thriller Evalution
In order for my group and I to produce a thriller opening which was successful and professional looking, we started by researching and comparing existing thriller openings. Doing this helped us to verify the conventions that thriller openings must contain. The use of mise-en-scene in thrillers in order to create suspense is approached in various ways. For instance; location in a thriller opening can stand as a very important narrative clue. In The Shinning, (a thriller that greatly influence my work) for example the location of the Overlook Hotel where it’s presence alone is slightly alarming, is used to reflect the protagonist's contrasting civilised behavior with his later malicious and psychotic possessed personality. This is demonstrated by presenting the character within the surrounding of a ‘normal’ environment, with his wife and child. I challenged the forms of conventions by using the idea of taking a normal setting and placing a character out of the ordinary in it. I used a busy city location to reel my audience into thinking everything was ok. I then used an isolated suburban setting to progress with a growing sense of threat or danger and the excitement of pursuit, an example of this can be found in the scene where the main character spots the disturbing figure with her house keys. I believe the use of these conventions indicate the sub-genre my thriller may come under.
In my product we used a teenage African female as the main ‘innocent’ character. The costume used for the main character was that of a normal teen from a working class background; dark coloured jeans, plim soles, a dark jacket and a black woolly hat.
I believe if taken on by a great director and given a reasonable budget, my film has the potential to be produced as a big Hollywood studio, as our ideas are quite similar to existing products, for e.g. The Bone Collector
As I previously mentioned, my target audience is people aged 15 plus. We closely focused on the target audience we were aiming our film towards. We chose a wide target audience of both males and females ranging from ages 15-30. People from this age group are more likely to visit the cinema and watch particularly a thriller film. Jade, 18, works in fashion retail and enjoys watching thrilling movies with friends, shops on the high street, lives in a suburban area, is from a working class background; this is typical person who would fit into my target audience. Aimed at those primarily from a working class background, it is not single gender specific. Our narrative was aimed to allow our target audience to be able to relate. A modern young black teenage girl with dreams and aspiration just like any normal teen, on her way to a social gathering and gets abducted and is missing for a long while. From our previous study of the thriller genre we were aware that to create an effective opening which creates suspense in narrative, there must be unanswered questions which will compel the viewer to anticipate action with a resolution. For our opening sequence we wanted to create a narrative structure that would encourage the viewer to continue watching the rest of the film and that would leave areas in which the film could develop.
Throughout the duration of this thriller my group and I learnt a substantial amount of things. Despite the fact that we faced many set backs we were still able to complete our media product before the deadline. Mid way into filming our thriller we were forced to make a tough decision. We originally set out to film at night time but due to bad lighting it was recommended that we set it during the daytime. During playback we realised that the footage we filmed came out too dark. Filming during the day proved easier and we weren’t waiting around for the sun to go down. We learnt that in order to include successful match cuts, the same action needed to be shot from different angles, being careful not to break the 180 degree rule. We explored different camera shots; extreme long shots to show the physical context of action and landscape, long shots, medium shots, and close ups to focus on one character and their facial expression which are
We used soundtrack pro to put together our soundtrack then exported it to final cut pro where we played around with the volume levels and made sure sounds came in at the right times giving the right effects (Audio of Sound Track). Logging and capturing was simple. The editing process became more enjoyable once we got the hang of using final cut pro. As I became more familiar with the program editing became quicker.
When I look back at the preliminary match cut task that I did. I have realised how important it is to plan and story board the ideas that you have for your Thriller before we go and film it. For the actual Thriller we decided to film many different angles of the same piece of action and this was something that we didn’t do in the preliminary task. The match cut task really helped me when I came to do my actual Thriller as it allowed me to have knowledge of how to do really good match cuts. I believe match cuts are important for helping to establish a strong continuity of action. It can be used to underline a connection between two separate elements, or for purely visual reasons. (Video of Preliminary task) When it came to editing the Thriller it made it slightly easier as we had practiced on the preliminary but there were still things that need to be learnt. Having done the preliminary task, it allowed us to also get to grips with our organisation and also sharing out the task. We knew that it wouldn’t be easy to do anything without the whole group pulling their weight. As the process continued I found myself being more confident in using the software’s like Final Cut Pro, Soundtrack Pro and Live Type.
We had very positive audience feedback which made me proud of my work. We were told that the black and white effect was effective and the use of sound effects worked. I was really pleased that people enjoyed watching the Thriller and that they were supportive of the work. If I had to do this again I would plan more in depth and know exactly what I was going to go and film before I started as this wasted a lot of time. (Video of Thriller)
Louise Olanipekun
Sunday, 1 March 2009
Final Edit and Finished Thriller
We needed to put on sound effects on important things like the girl and also the name of the road "Massie Road".
Before we did that we finished off blending in the different soundtracks and mixing the radio bit together. When we had finished blending all the music together we exported the project to soundtrack pro in order to put in sound effect. We found it hard finding sound effect that would go with all the different bits. We finally found some effects and it worked well.
We wanted the last bit of the stalker to really stand out so we slowed down the footage and also put heartbeats on it gradually increasing in volume as the stalker approached the girl.
We tried to put several effects on different part like where we see the flash of the girl, but was unable as the shot was too short. We instead had to just use a sound effect.
We looked at the footage and realised that in several times it was sunny at sometimes the floor was wet and so we decided to make the whole Thriller black and white. We we watched it again in black and white it looked more professional and stood out more. It really gave the effect that we was looking for.
At the end with stalker we used an effect that made the screen sharp this gave a more thrilling feel and made it look more effective. I was unable to attend tutorial as the deadline was fast approaching but luckily we was able to finish the Thriller at 12:25pm.
I was really happy that we was able to finish. A lot of work was put into making this Thriller and together as a group despite the absence of one member and sometimes the lack of commitment we was still able to finish and in my eyes have a successful Thriller.
Friday, 27 February 2009
'Let em play God'
Joseph Hitchcock wrote an article called thrills, suspense, the audience'. In this article Hitchcock. We always wonder how movie makers get the audience at the edge of their seat and Joseph Hitchcock talks about this. ‘Let em play God’, Hitchcock assumes that suspense is built up when the audience plays God. If as the audience we are unaware if a character is a hero or villain they will not know whether to rejoice or not rejoice. Hitchcock says if the audience has been told all the secrets that the character doesn’t know, “they’ll work like the devil for you because they know what fate is facing the poor actors”. He describes this as “Playing God”.
Surprise not suspense is built if a character is not convincing according to Hitchcock. Hitchcock also says that we do not need effects such as shadows, dull weather and creaky doors to build up suspense. His movie ‘Rope’ was evidence for this point. As Hitchcock became more interested in developing his suspense techniques, he chose to shoot these types of stories exclusively. When Hitchcock had made ‘Secret Agent’, ‘Sabotage’, and ‘The 39 Steps’ this conclusion was made.
Thursday, 26 February 2009
Workshop Editing
When i first arrived at college my group members had not yet arrived so i got into the editing room and working on completing the editing. The rest of my group joined me shortly after and together, we began thinking about how to build up tension and create a sense of suspense through sound for the shots where the sudden flash of the mysterious girl appears and the walk before reaching massie road. We decided to have different sounds layerd together but bringing them in graduall inorder to create a false sense of sercurity, so the viewers think it is nothing but a normal day. Making the sound proved difficult as we found it hard to blend everything together smoothly and make the transition between diagetic and non-diagetic sound seemless.
After lunch time Gerald and I returned to media workshop anxious to do more work as the deadline is tomorow! We worked on fitting the new suspense sound that we had made into the footage and it worked very well together.
Tomorrow Myself and Gerald plan to get to college for 9:00am even though we start at 1.15 inorder not to risk leaving little bits and bobs of editing till last minute as i am sure the suites will be rampacked later on in the day. During this time we will be adding the last bits of visual effects where neccesary to enhance the thrill of the scene e.g.the illusion of the girl and also the stalker scene. I believe as a group we have worked considerably well to get our Thriller completed by the deadline, but if askes to do this again i would make SEVERAL modifications. But i enjoyed working on this project.
Media Lesson and Work Shop 26/2/09
In the last bits of the Thriller where the stalker sees the girl, Anabel told us that it was too long but we couldn't fit any footage in between so we had to leave it how it was. Where the stalker runs up on the girl, we slowed it up and made it more effective.
After lunch time i came back to media workshop in order to do more work as the deadline is Friday. When i came back i put the sound that we had made onto the footage and it worked really well.
Tomorrow i am planning on getting to college for 9:00am even though i start at 11:00am so that i can have time to put more sound effects and also to add any effect for the illusion of the girl and also the stalker scene. I think the group have worked well in order to get the Thriller done, but we still need that little bit more work in order for it to be completed well and successful.
Todays Workshop - 26th February
Some of the things we needed to remember were:
· The natural sounds of the girl (Louise) grabbing the keys.
· The sound of the front door slamming.
We started off by dragging the music sequence into final cut pro. In order to make the transfer from non-diagetic sound to diagetic sound we used the pencil like form key, to mark in or out the sound. Deciding when it should start and finishing. I really like what we did with the music in the beginning, were we faded in and out from the sound of the radio.
Once we were happy with that we had, we played the film and showed it to the teachers and technicians. Some of the staff approved with the whole sequence, wheras some dissagreed and thought that the point of view perspective of the stalker went on fot too long and needed to be broken up with different shots of the girl point of view or simply just at a different angle.
Whereas some of the other staff appreciated the length of the sequence and knew what was happening straight away. Due to the many different responses of my group members and staff this did lead to a passive disagreement. This did waste quite a bit of time because we tried to re-arrange the shots in different orders and lengths to see if we could make the scene more obvious, still keeping the audience in suspense.
So after fiddling about, we came to an agreement to leave it how it was originally however with the shots of the little girl (Ana), we would use effects such as a negative to create a more sinister feeling. So the lesson did progress on but we were unable to find any effects for when Ana flashes on the screen. So we decided to stop wasting time in searching and move on the to the soundtrack again. We opened up the orginal music we made from before and started to try and develope it. Focusing on thinckening the music for when Ana first appears on the screen.
While doing this we also tried to find a noise that sounded like a bang, something that was unexpected but happened so quickly that the audience would be in shock, anticipating wondering whats going to happen next.
Overall I think this lesson was very productive, even with all the interuptions, with attending so many workshops throughout the week I could really see the development of our opening thriller and was happy with the outcome.
Gerald is going to come in early in the morning to finish a tiny htiches as i won't be ablt to attend because I have a 3hour lesson in the morning, Louise may join him later in the day and I hopefully will get there in time to view it and Save it for the examiner.
Wednesday, 25 February 2009
Wednesday 25th - Workshop
Once I returned to my lesson and rejoined Gerald and Louise they had successfully put all the clips together, including match cuts and followed the 180° rule. I was really proud of what they had accomplished in the time I was in my lesson and was excited to just crack down with putting on the right back ground effects and music etc. So once we embed the video again, into soundtrack pro we were assisted in adjusting the different noises you hear in the clips, with one of the technicians. I know myself and Gerald was having problems with adjusting the volume and getting the natural noises to run smoothly into the radio sounds. But after a long practical days work, I agreed to leave about an hour early to go home.
I believe that in tomorrow’s lesson due to length of it we will get a lot done and will be successfully completed for Friday.
Monday 23rd Lesson and Workshop
Subsequently we managed to find something else to do, and tried to put our footage into soundtrack pro were we could organise were we wanted specific sound effects, how loud and long we should have it playing in one shot. Etc.
Sadly we also found that the 180° rule was broken again were we did try to match from the same angle, causing us to have many jump shots. So we planned what needed to be filmed for the last time so that this could all be logged and captured in workshop lessons by Wednesday ready for Thursday’s lessons.
Workshop editing
Louise and I had stayed in college up to 6:00pm so that we could get as much work done as the deadline is fast approaching. It was difficult when fitting in sound effect as we had to get it all accurate and also low enough in volume to be made background noise.
We had realised that once again despite being told we had broken the 180 degrees rule and so we had to go and film again. We came back and fitted it in perfectly.
In tomorrow's lesson we have to get as much done and basically be finished. I am planning on reaching college early tomorrow so that i can get a lot of work done to meet the deadline this Friday. I hope as a group we will be able to finish everything and have a successful Thriller
Monday 16th February - Half Term Catch Up Workshop
Due to the location being much closer to Gerald and Louise, as well as there only being a minimum filming left to do. I meet the rest of my group back at college, to log, capture and edit all that had been filmed.
I was hoping that this was the final footage of what we needed. As repeating scenes and going out to book equipment and arrange time to meet up was getting very frustrating and repetitive. Once I arrived at college my group seemed to have a mishap with the time because we were led to believing the workshop was concluding at 5pm, not 3.30pm.
So with only a short amount of time left, my group were only able to show Gerald what we had done over the week and start to log and capture what was recently shot in that morning before the session ended.
In comparison, regardless of the little time I was able to spend with my group members we were able to discuss and prioritise what we were going to do for our next lesson back and agree to taking as many workshops as possible to make sure our deadline is best meet.
Workshop Editing
Final Filming 24-02-09
Gerald and I decided we had to film some bits again as we had not gotten somethings right. We had no time to wait for Thursdays lesson so we decided we would go and film the things today. We revisited our outside location Massie Road and reshot a couple of shots where we had broken rules such as the 180 degree rule. We also had to re film the stalker bit because the way we filmed it, it didn't look like someone was getting stalked but just looked like a normal camera looking at the girl. We had broken the 180 degrees rule and so then shot the stalker from a different angle. To show that there was a stalker we used the camera behind cars and moved a lot to show that the girl was being watched.
When we were satisfied with our new footage we moved to our indoor location, where we concluded our filming. We first shot the bit where the girl left the house and panned to the radio. We shot this from many different angles, giving us a variety of shots, which we would be able to use for variety and also make very effective match cuts.
We plan to attend Media Workshop tomorrow.
Tuesday, 24 February 2009
Final Filming
When we finished college at 3:00 pm we went and booked out the camera for over night. We set off to our first location i where the girl spots the mysterious girl and also the panning of the post code. When we first shot the post code, the pan was too slow and we also zoomed in whilst filming. Rebbecca told us that it wasn't right so instead we tracked the girl until she past the post code then she walked out of the shot and i quickly panned up and focused on the post code. Instead of zooming in, i filmed then paused it, zoomed in and then recorded again.
We also had to re film the stalker bit because the way we filmed it, it didn't look like someone was getting stalked but just looked like a normal camera looking at the girl. We had also broke the 180 degrees rule and so had the stalker in a different place. To show that thee was a stalker I used the camera behind cars and was moving a lot to show that the girl was being watched.
When we first shot the bit where the girl left the house and panned to the radio, it didn't come up for some reason, so we did that again. We also shot the same thing in many different angles so that it gives us a variety of shots that we can use and also make very effective match cuts.
Tomorrow after in finish college i plan to attend Media Workshop as i am aware that the deadline is fast approaching. I plan on logging and capturing the footage that me and Louise filmed today and also finishing of the music so that on Thursday and Friday we can put everything together and hopefully have a good Thriller
Monday, 23 February 2009
Workshop/editing lesson
I along with the rest of my group attended workshop. We as a group have faced many problems throughout the duration of making this thriller opening and because this, are trying our best to attend workshops as well as lessons in order to meet the deadline.
in today's lesson we continue with editing our thriller. We tried to log and capture the footage myself and Louise shot on the half term Monday workshop but for some reason the footage would not show up on the screen therefore, although we were frustrated, we decided that we would just have to refill it. As we carried on editing we found bits of footage that were either non unable or just needed redoing because of rules broken such as; the 180 degrees rule and match cutting from the same angle causing jump shots. we took note of all the things we needed to re film, and planned to film them on tomorrow after college so that we could attend workshop on Wednesday to log capture and edit. We also embedded our footage onto soundtrack pro in order to see how our filming fitted in with our music. last we took note of what sort of effects we will be inputting and where they will go.
23-02-09
let em play God
His article is called thrills, suspense, the audience'. In this article Hitchcock talks about how every mystery movie makers aim is to have the audience at the edge of their seats the technique involved in doing this is suspense. According to Hitchcock suspense is created when you let the audience play God. If they are unaware whether a character is a hero or villain they will not know whether to rejoice or not rejoice. Hitchcock says if the audience have been told all the secrets that the character dont no, “they’ll work like the devil for you because they know what fate is facing the poor actors”. He describes this as “Playing God”.
Hitchcock believes that when characters are not convincing you only get suprise but not suspense. He also believes that inorder for suspense to be created, you do not need effects such as shadows, stormy/dull weather and creaky doors; his movie ‘Rope’ was evidence for this point. As Hitchcock became more interested in developing his suspense techniques, he chose to shoot these type of stories exclusively; this conclusion came by the time he had made his movies‘Secret Agent' ,‘Sabotage’, and ‘The 39 Steps’.
Thriller Genres
> SCI-FI
> CRIME
> PSYCOLOGICAL- PLAYS WITH YOUR MIND.
> ACTION
> SUPERNATURAL
> AQUIRED IDENTITY
> MURDEROUS PASSION E.G. LOVE TRIANGLES
> INNOCENT ON THE RUN
> GOOD VS EVIL
> POLITICAL
> KIDNAPPING
Half Term Workshop catch up
After we had filmed i asked Louise if she was able to attend the Media Half Term workshop catch up and she said that was OK. We then contacted Pareece and we all attended. When we first got there Louise and Pareece showed me what they had done in the week i was away. We then logged and captured the footage that me and Louise had filmed. We didn't get a lot done but it was still good as we had all the footage that we thought we needed. On Monday when we return to college i plan to attend workshop.
Workshop/lesson
We edited our footage but still found that there were minor pieces of footage either missing or not usable meaning once aqain and for hopefully the last time, we will have to book out a camera and re film those missing parts.
Although we couldnt complete editing because of the missing footage, we decided to move onto trying to fit our music in with the footage. We also thought about the different effects we will be using and where they will go. As a group we have planned to attend workshop every lunch to complete this work and meet the deadline.
brainstorming the thriller genre
THRILLERS
-psychological thriller-plays with your mind. frightening becoz it cud happen.
- kidnapping
- Super natural- based accult-ghosts ect
- Sci-Fi
- Crime- spy thriller-
political thrillers- Government corruption political conspiricy
- Action
- Acquired identity . Cloning. Stealing
- Innocent on the run
- Good vs Evil
- Murderous passions- Love triangle, affairs blackmail
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Wednesday, 18 February 2009
Half Term Catch Up Workshop
Tuesday, 17 February 2009
Plan For The Media Work Shop
- Grabbing the keys with the correct hands
- Closing the front door
- Pan from closed door to radio
- Zoom into radio (With the radio in the correct focus and in the middle of the screen)
- Pan up to "Massie Road" sign
As well as general things we needed to catch up on:
- Re-do all credits
- Re-edit the soundtrack
- Create and give dialogue to Mickey